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	<title>Comments on: Better Character Ideas: Throw Two Away</title>
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	<description>You are the stories you write.</description>
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		<title>By: I don't like Magician with a Pencil</title>
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		<dc:creator>I don't like Magician with a Pencil</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Dec 2009 17:31:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re grammar is terrible. So obviously you&#039;re not really a writer. That or you&#039;re publisher is one of two things; really friggin&#039; nice, or really friggin&#039; dumb.

By the way, this is the best advice I have ever been given.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re grammar is terrible. So obviously you&#8217;re not really a writer. That or you&#8217;re publisher is one of two things; really friggin&#8217; nice, or really friggin&#8217; dumb.</p>
<p>By the way, this is the best advice I have ever been given.</p>
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		<title>By: Magician with a pencil</title>
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		<dc:creator>Magician with a pencil</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Dec 2008 05:59:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>u give pretty good advice but i have been writing stories for two years and some of my ideas that just popped into my head are pretty damn good. Others not so much though. But i have a publisher and i sent her a few chapters of my latest work and she said she only had to edit one paragraph out of the whole thing so im sure i no how to wright a story. I&#039;ll TRY it your way though. And yes i know I&#039;m self centered and selfish. Sometimes. Most of the time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>u give pretty good advice but i have been writing stories for two years and some of my ideas that just popped into my head are pretty damn good. Others not so much though. But i have a publisher and i sent her a few chapters of my latest work and she said she only had to edit one paragraph out of the whole thing so im sure i no how to wright a story. I&#8217;ll TRY it your way though. And yes i know I&#8217;m self centered and selfish. Sometimes. Most of the time.</p>
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