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		<title>Comment on Story Hidden &#8220;In Plain Sight&#8221; (the TV show) by Jerry Jones</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2011/05/04/story-hidden-in-plain-sight/comment-page-1#comment-30985</link>
		<dc:creator>Jerry Jones</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 May 2012 02:12:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent insights on writing well for television. On the mark in your comments on In Plain Sight. A very good character-driven drama. Thanks</description>
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		<title>Comment on Editing Your First Novel: 7 Things You Must Know by Editing Your NaNoWriMo Novel &#124;</title>
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		<dc:creator>Editing Your NaNoWriMo Novel &#124;</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 14 May 2012 15:38:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on 10 Flash Fiction Writing Tips by Duotrope, the Flashing Cop: A Hero&#8217;s Journey -or- Links &#124; Josh Mosey &#124; Writer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Duotrope, the Flashing Cop: A Hero&#8217;s Journey -or- Links &#124; Josh Mosey &#124; Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 May 2012 11:04:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 10 Flash Fiction Writing Tips: This week, I&#8217;ve been a bit focused on flash fiction. If you want to try your hand at writing ridiculously short stories, here are some things to keep in mind. I should probably start using this advice myself. [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by Brendan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brendan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 May 2012 19:34:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>im have to write a character story and i think i want to write something about a childish old man, but dont know where to start, and would appriciate help</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>im have to write a character story and i think i want to write something about a childish old man, but dont know where to start, and would appriciate help</p>
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		<title>Comment on 10 Basic Character Needs by Anonymous</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Apr 2012 08:47:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your info to assist with my assignment - aspiring social worker</description>
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		<title>Comment on Editing Your First Novel: 7 Things You Must Know by Chau Doan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chau Doan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 15 Mar 2012 09:55:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi J. Timothy King,
I am Chau Doan, I just finished my novel that I started 5 years ago. I share the point 6 and 7 with you. Tks for this post. I am quite tired at the end.
Good luck writers!
Cheers</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi J. Timothy King,<br />
I am Chau Doan, I just finished my novel that I started 5 years ago. I share the point 6 and 7 with you. Tks for this post. I am quite tired at the end.<br />
Good luck writers!<br />
Cheers</p>
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		<title>Comment on 10 Flash Fiction Writing Tips by 12 Articles on Writing Flash Fiction You Should Check Out &#124; Flash Writing</title>
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		<dc:creator>12 Articles on Writing Flash Fiction You Should Check Out &#124; Flash Writing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 07 Mar 2012 01:11:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on Should You Always Avoid the Verb &#8220;To Be&#8221;? by Roberta Gallant</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2009/12/28/should-you-always-avoid-the-verb-to-be/comment-page-1#comment-30967</link>
		<dc:creator>Roberta Gallant</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Mar 2012 15:54:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mr. King, I love your article on this website 
because it teaches me how to avoid to-be verbs 
in my writing.  You teach other people well.
Thank you kindly for your elegant eye opener!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mr. King, I love your article on this website<br />
because it teaches me how to avoid to-be verbs<br />
in my writing.  You teach other people well.<br />
Thank you kindly for your elegant eye opener!</p>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by Michaela</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michaela</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 26 Feb 2012 21:24:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m a teen writer. At the moment I&#039;m having trouble starting my dtories. I always get the first scentence or two, and then give up. I&#039;d love it if someone could give me advice and maybe read some of my story. Thanks 
  Here&#039;s my email: Michaela16186@yahoo.com</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m a teen writer. At the moment I&#8217;m having trouble starting my dtories. I always get the first scentence or two, and then give up. I&#8217;d love it if someone could give me advice and maybe read some of my story. Thanks<br />
  Here&#8217;s my email: <a href="mailto:Michaela16186@yahoo.com">Michaela16186@yahoo.com</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on The Secret to Naming Characters by lexi</title>
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		<dc:creator>lexi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Feb 2012 02:18:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>writers wast time on the names any name will fit any character! like Alexis Stewert, a tall blonde hiared firey tempered girl, Jami Dupis a short quarky guy. the names fit.</description>
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		<title>Comment on How to Design Your Book Cover by Rosie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rosie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Feb 2012 02:54:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I find this very helpful. Do you think though, that someone like myself could design a good cover? This is great advice, good to keep in mind for when a graphic designer does your cover.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I find this very helpful. Do you think though, that someone like myself could design a good cover? This is great advice, good to keep in mind for when a graphic designer does your cover.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing Character Flaws by LScribeHarris</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2012/02/08/character-flaws/comment-page-1#comment-30958</link>
		<dc:creator>LScribeHarris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 13:51:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Awesome! Thanks for expanding upon the podcast. This was an interesting expansion of thought, particularly the bit about the flaws that do not contribute to plot or story being neutral, and the elements that serve less purpose being negative.

Thanks for the extra thoughts to chew on, and thanks for listening to the podcast! ~Scribe</description>
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<p>Thanks for the extra thoughts to chew on, and thanks for listening to the podcast! ~Scribe</p>
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		<title>Comment on Where to Get Character Names by Anonymous</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Dec 2011 03:17:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>my character is a goth girl, and her name is zara. is that a suitable name.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>my character is a goth girl, and her name is zara. is that a suitable name.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by Breannalyn Raposa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Breannalyn Raposa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Dec 2011 02:04:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am currently writing a story, and I would love for someone to read it ;) Give me some feedback, and help in anyway.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am currently writing a story, and I would love for someone to read it <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  Give me some feedback, and help in anyway.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What the End of Borders Means for Authors by Requiem for a Dream</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2011/07/25/what-the-end-of-borders-means-for-authors/comment-page-1#comment-30951</link>
		<dc:creator>Requiem for a Dream</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Dec 2011 08:12:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What the end of Borders and the end of the traditional publishing industry means is the rise of total crap. You mentioned blogging as a new evolution in the &quot;writing industry.&quot; Last I checked there was no such thing. An &quot;industry&quot; by nature needs profit to survive. Most blogs are not profitable, even if they use ad banners, and most readers use ad blockers and filtering software that blocks the banners anyway. Nobody likes to be reading an article and then have a big ad for blue pills or fake handbags pop out of nowhere. Plus, most bloggers are not good writers. They&#039;re readable (well, some are anyway, the Twits on micro-blogs notwithstanding), but readability does not necessarily equate to storytelling ability. Granted, not everyone who writes a book will go for a fiction path. But for those who do, they are forced to dumb their talent down for the interest of &quot;analytics&quot; and &quot;optimization&quot;; a few choice blogs may end up in the top tier, but that says nothing for what happens to the short story or novel. Somehow I fear that it will go the way of the eight-track and the campfire circle as mere memories of communication past.

The rise of ebooks has indeed killed the &quot;traditional midlist author&quot; and brought a new &quot;midlist&quot; that is close to impossible to break out of, simply because there are more people getting involved than ever before. There&#039;s no quality control with the end of traditional publishing, and there are too many heads in the group from which to distinguish oneself. Plus, no longer does a &quot;bestseller&quot; incorporate writing ability as the primary reason it becomes one -- promotional ability, this thing called &quot;platform,&quot; or &quot;presence,&quot; or &quot;networking,&quot; which is really equal part sugarcoating to make nice and bull$*** to make headway. Just look at the &quot;democratic&quot; model of Harper Collins&#039; Authonomy, a nice idea on paper but a failure in practice. All too often the &quot;up votes&quot; went to people who&#039;d been generous in giving others kudos and gold stars and reciprocating in return; it did nothing to offer valid critique or editing, because that would bruise the writer/user&#039;s ego too much and wind up with down-votes turned to playground anarchy. The &quot;democratic&quot; publishing model is really the diplomatic equivalent of Jersey Shore.

Moreover, there&#039;s no soul involved in the mechanical digitzation of words on a page. Call me old fashioned, but there&#039;s just something, I don&#039;t know, romantic about curling up with a paperback (or even a hardcover) in a quiet room without the buzzing and flashing of wi-fi routers and Twitter updates. Seeing as the democratic model has become a proven failure, the next step will be formulas and analytics to determine what people like to read and what sells. Nielsen BookScan + Google PageRank + how many likes on Facebook + Tweets and followers + readability statistics will wind us all in an idiocratic mess. This is the C:\Spot.run model, the cold, dystopian future that Bradbury and Orwell warned us about. (Two authors who&#039;d be in the slush pile today because their heroes didn&#039;t &quot;sparkle.&quot;)

But it&#039;s also about advertising, just like how baseball is no longer America&#039;s pastime but &quot;passive income&quot; for the stadiums that re-christen ballparks with their company brand. The next thing for publishing, if it hasn&#039;t come to this point already, will be advertisements inserted within the Kindle &quot;book&quot; itself (sorry, but ebooks are not books, at least not to me), and someday even the content diluted with pointless SEO keywords and &quot;trending topics&quot; -- the Google-ization of literature is what it will be. You&#039;ll have marketing &quot;gurus&quot; commissioning aspiring authors to write &quot;novels&quot; with thinly disguised versions of the CEOs themselves as the &quot;heroes&quot; and their rivals as the bad guys. Captain Coke vs. the Mad Dr. Pepper.

Electronic publishing is maybe the best thing that could happen for the BUSINESS of the Internet, but the worst that could happen for writers (who are too prolific and intelligent to call themselves &quot;bloggers&quot;), for publishing industry employees, such as agents and editors, who will maybe have an edge in re-branding themselves as &quot;coaches&quot; or &quot;marketing experts&quot; or some such puffed-up title, and yes, in the end, for the readers, whose chance to experience the next War &amp; Peace will be diluted yet again, thwarted by the One Percent Powers That Be who&#039;ve managed to make something corporate and soulless out of the one thing sacred to our very human existence: the creative spark that ignites a powerful human narrative. Mechanized, monetized, and in the end, pulverized.

I sincerely hope I&#039;m not around to see it. I certainly won&#039;t be there to write it, because if a dead tree falls and no one at Amazon is there to digitize it, then no one will know and no one will care. :(</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What the end of Borders and the end of the traditional publishing industry means is the rise of total crap. You mentioned blogging as a new evolution in the &#8220;writing industry.&#8221; Last I checked there was no such thing. An &#8220;industry&#8221; by nature needs profit to survive. Most blogs are not profitable, even if they use ad banners, and most readers use ad blockers and filtering software that blocks the banners anyway. Nobody likes to be reading an article and then have a big ad for blue pills or fake handbags pop out of nowhere. Plus, most bloggers are not good writers. They&#8217;re readable (well, some are anyway, the Twits on micro-blogs notwithstanding), but readability does not necessarily equate to storytelling ability. Granted, not everyone who writes a book will go for a fiction path. But for those who do, they are forced to dumb their talent down for the interest of &#8220;analytics&#8221; and &#8220;optimization&#8221;; a few choice blogs may end up in the top tier, but that says nothing for what happens to the short story or novel. Somehow I fear that it will go the way of the eight-track and the campfire circle as mere memories of communication past.</p>
<p>The rise of ebooks has indeed killed the &#8220;traditional midlist author&#8221; and brought a new &#8220;midlist&#8221; that is close to impossible to break out of, simply because there are more people getting involved than ever before. There&#8217;s no quality control with the end of traditional publishing, and there are too many heads in the group from which to distinguish oneself. Plus, no longer does a &#8220;bestseller&#8221; incorporate writing ability as the primary reason it becomes one &#8212; promotional ability, this thing called &#8220;platform,&#8221; or &#8220;presence,&#8221; or &#8220;networking,&#8221; which is really equal part sugarcoating to make nice and bull$*** to make headway. Just look at the &#8220;democratic&#8221; model of Harper Collins&#8217; Authonomy, a nice idea on paper but a failure in practice. All too often the &#8220;up votes&#8221; went to people who&#8217;d been generous in giving others kudos and gold stars and reciprocating in return; it did nothing to offer valid critique or editing, because that would bruise the writer/user&#8217;s ego too much and wind up with down-votes turned to playground anarchy. The &#8220;democratic&#8221; publishing model is really the diplomatic equivalent of Jersey Shore.</p>
<p>Moreover, there&#8217;s no soul involved in the mechanical digitzation of words on a page. Call me old fashioned, but there&#8217;s just something, I don&#8217;t know, romantic about curling up with a paperback (or even a hardcover) in a quiet room without the buzzing and flashing of wi-fi routers and Twitter updates. Seeing as the democratic model has become a proven failure, the next step will be formulas and analytics to determine what people like to read and what sells. Nielsen BookScan + Google PageRank + how many likes on Facebook + Tweets and followers + readability statistics will wind us all in an idiocratic mess. This is the C:\Spot.run model, the cold, dystopian future that Bradbury and Orwell warned us about. (Two authors who&#8217;d be in the slush pile today because their heroes didn&#8217;t &#8220;sparkle.&#8221;)</p>
<p>But it&#8217;s also about advertising, just like how baseball is no longer America&#8217;s pastime but &#8220;passive income&#8221; for the stadiums that re-christen ballparks with their company brand. The next thing for publishing, if it hasn&#8217;t come to this point already, will be advertisements inserted within the Kindle &#8220;book&#8221; itself (sorry, but ebooks are not books, at least not to me), and someday even the content diluted with pointless SEO keywords and &#8220;trending topics&#8221; &#8212; the Google-ization of literature is what it will be. You&#8217;ll have marketing &#8220;gurus&#8221; commissioning aspiring authors to write &#8220;novels&#8221; with thinly disguised versions of the CEOs themselves as the &#8220;heroes&#8221; and their rivals as the bad guys. Captain Coke vs. the Mad Dr. Pepper.</p>
<p>Electronic publishing is maybe the best thing that could happen for the BUSINESS of the Internet, but the worst that could happen for writers (who are too prolific and intelligent to call themselves &#8220;bloggers&#8221;), for publishing industry employees, such as agents and editors, who will maybe have an edge in re-branding themselves as &#8220;coaches&#8221; or &#8220;marketing experts&#8221; or some such puffed-up title, and yes, in the end, for the readers, whose chance to experience the next War &amp; Peace will be diluted yet again, thwarted by the One Percent Powers That Be who&#8217;ve managed to make something corporate and soulless out of the one thing sacred to our very human existence: the creative spark that ignites a powerful human narrative. Mechanized, monetized, and in the end, pulverized.</p>
<p>I sincerely hope I&#8217;m not around to see it. I certainly won&#8217;t be there to write it, because if a dead tree falls and no one at Amazon is there to digitize it, then no one will know and no one will care. <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':(' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Design Your Book Cover by Enblanco Creativo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Enblanco Creativo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Dec 2011 11:00:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice article, I see the point of the anonymous but he&#039;s not right. Covers have to comunicate, in 1980 or in 2011. A good cover wich tell perfectly about the book never need to be updated, maybe for people who buy books because beautiful and modern covers. Nobody would change Michael Angelo&#039;s paintings for new ones because is art and comunicate perfectly, cover should be the same.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice article, I see the point of the anonymous but he&#8217;s not right. Covers have to comunicate, in 1980 or in 2011. A good cover wich tell perfectly about the book never need to be updated, maybe for people who buy books because beautiful and modern covers. Nobody would change Michael Angelo&#8217;s paintings for new ones because is art and comunicate perfectly, cover should be the same.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Checklist for Revising a Novel by Between the Sheets &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Revising Your NaNoWriMo Novel&#8230;or Any Other Novel For That Matter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Between the Sheets &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Revising Your NaNoWriMo Novel&#8230;or Any Other Novel For That Matter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 02:02:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] J Timothy King&#8217;s Checklist for Revising a Novel [...]</description>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by Lauren</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lauren</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2011 18:50:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Timothy,
I am an aspiring actress/author, and at the moment I am having a severly hard time developing a new story. I already have one written, if you would like to see some of that, but I can&#039;t think of any new ideas. PLEASE HELP! Just contact me by my email.
-Lauren</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Timothy,<br />
I am an aspiring actress/author, and at the moment I am having a severly hard time developing a new story. I already have one written, if you would like to see some of that, but I can&#8217;t think of any new ideas. PLEASE HELP! Just contact me by my email.<br />
-Lauren</p>
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		<title>Comment on Happy Thanksgiving Wishes by lexi</title>
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		<dc:creator>lexi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Nov 2011 23:56:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HAPPY THANKSGIVING TIM!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>HAPPY THANKSGIVING TIM!!!</p>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by lexi</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2007/11/08/100-free-fictional-character-ideas/comment-page-1#comment-30936</link>
		<dc:creator>lexi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Nov 2011 23:53:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love writing fanasy stories and I love poetry. Im only 12 but im not that small. I am a straght A student and i am happy all the time. I agree with CJ that the masculine pronouns in the article are very strange but great in the same way.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love writing fanasy stories and I love poetry. Im only 12 but im not that small. I am a straght A student and i am happy all the time. I agree with CJ that the masculine pronouns in the article are very strange but great in the same way.</p>
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