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		<title>Comment on Where to Get Character Names by Anonymous</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Dec 2011 03:17:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>my character is a goth girl, and her name is zara. is that a suitable name.</description>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by Breannalyn Raposa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Breannalyn Raposa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Dec 2011 02:04:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am currently writing a story, and I would love for someone to read it ;) Give me some feedback, and help in anyway.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am currently writing a story, and I would love for someone to read it <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />  Give me some feedback, and help in anyway.</p>
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		<title>Comment on What the End of Borders Means for Authors by Requiem for a Dream</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2011/07/25/what-the-end-of-borders-means-for-authors/comment-page-1#comment-30951</link>
		<dc:creator>Requiem for a Dream</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Dec 2011 08:12:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What the end of Borders and the end of the traditional publishing industry means is the rise of total crap. You mentioned blogging as a new evolution in the &quot;writing industry.&quot; Last I checked there was no such thing. An &quot;industry&quot; by nature needs profit to survive. Most blogs are not profitable, even if they use ad banners, and most readers use ad blockers and filtering software that blocks the banners anyway. Nobody likes to be reading an article and then have a big ad for blue pills or fake handbags pop out of nowhere. Plus, most bloggers are not good writers. They&#039;re readable (well, some are anyway, the Twits on micro-blogs notwithstanding), but readability does not necessarily equate to storytelling ability. Granted, not everyone who writes a book will go for a fiction path. But for those who do, they are forced to dumb their talent down for the interest of &quot;analytics&quot; and &quot;optimization&quot;; a few choice blogs may end up in the top tier, but that says nothing for what happens to the short story or novel. Somehow I fear that it will go the way of the eight-track and the campfire circle as mere memories of communication past.

The rise of ebooks has indeed killed the &quot;traditional midlist author&quot; and brought a new &quot;midlist&quot; that is close to impossible to break out of, simply because there are more people getting involved than ever before. There&#039;s no quality control with the end of traditional publishing, and there are too many heads in the group from which to distinguish oneself. Plus, no longer does a &quot;bestseller&quot; incorporate writing ability as the primary reason it becomes one -- promotional ability, this thing called &quot;platform,&quot; or &quot;presence,&quot; or &quot;networking,&quot; which is really equal part sugarcoating to make nice and bull$*** to make headway. Just look at the &quot;democratic&quot; model of Harper Collins&#039; Authonomy, a nice idea on paper but a failure in practice. All too often the &quot;up votes&quot; went to people who&#039;d been generous in giving others kudos and gold stars and reciprocating in return; it did nothing to offer valid critique or editing, because that would bruise the writer/user&#039;s ego too much and wind up with down-votes turned to playground anarchy. The &quot;democratic&quot; publishing model is really the diplomatic equivalent of Jersey Shore.

Moreover, there&#039;s no soul involved in the mechanical digitzation of words on a page. Call me old fashioned, but there&#039;s just something, I don&#039;t know, romantic about curling up with a paperback (or even a hardcover) in a quiet room without the buzzing and flashing of wi-fi routers and Twitter updates. Seeing as the democratic model has become a proven failure, the next step will be formulas and analytics to determine what people like to read and what sells. Nielsen BookScan + Google PageRank + how many likes on Facebook + Tweets and followers + readability statistics will wind us all in an idiocratic mess. This is the C:\Spot.run model, the cold, dystopian future that Bradbury and Orwell warned us about. (Two authors who&#039;d be in the slush pile today because their heroes didn&#039;t &quot;sparkle.&quot;)

But it&#039;s also about advertising, just like how baseball is no longer America&#039;s pastime but &quot;passive income&quot; for the stadiums that re-christen ballparks with their company brand. The next thing for publishing, if it hasn&#039;t come to this point already, will be advertisements inserted within the Kindle &quot;book&quot; itself (sorry, but ebooks are not books, at least not to me), and someday even the content diluted with pointless SEO keywords and &quot;trending topics&quot; -- the Google-ization of literature is what it will be. You&#039;ll have marketing &quot;gurus&quot; commissioning aspiring authors to write &quot;novels&quot; with thinly disguised versions of the CEOs themselves as the &quot;heroes&quot; and their rivals as the bad guys. Captain Coke vs. the Mad Dr. Pepper.

Electronic publishing is maybe the best thing that could happen for the BUSINESS of the Internet, but the worst that could happen for writers (who are too prolific and intelligent to call themselves &quot;bloggers&quot;), for publishing industry employees, such as agents and editors, who will maybe have an edge in re-branding themselves as &quot;coaches&quot; or &quot;marketing experts&quot; or some such puffed-up title, and yes, in the end, for the readers, whose chance to experience the next War &amp; Peace will be diluted yet again, thwarted by the One Percent Powers That Be who&#039;ve managed to make something corporate and soulless out of the one thing sacred to our very human existence: the creative spark that ignites a powerful human narrative. Mechanized, monetized, and in the end, pulverized.

I sincerely hope I&#039;m not around to see it. I certainly won&#039;t be there to write it, because if a dead tree falls and no one at Amazon is there to digitize it, then no one will know and no one will care. :(</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What the end of Borders and the end of the traditional publishing industry means is the rise of total crap. You mentioned blogging as a new evolution in the &#8220;writing industry.&#8221; Last I checked there was no such thing. An &#8220;industry&#8221; by nature needs profit to survive. Most blogs are not profitable, even if they use ad banners, and most readers use ad blockers and filtering software that blocks the banners anyway. Nobody likes to be reading an article and then have a big ad for blue pills or fake handbags pop out of nowhere. Plus, most bloggers are not good writers. They&#8217;re readable (well, some are anyway, the Twits on micro-blogs notwithstanding), but readability does not necessarily equate to storytelling ability. Granted, not everyone who writes a book will go for a fiction path. But for those who do, they are forced to dumb their talent down for the interest of &#8220;analytics&#8221; and &#8220;optimization&#8221;; a few choice blogs may end up in the top tier, but that says nothing for what happens to the short story or novel. Somehow I fear that it will go the way of the eight-track and the campfire circle as mere memories of communication past.</p>
<p>The rise of ebooks has indeed killed the &#8220;traditional midlist author&#8221; and brought a new &#8220;midlist&#8221; that is close to impossible to break out of, simply because there are more people getting involved than ever before. There&#8217;s no quality control with the end of traditional publishing, and there are too many heads in the group from which to distinguish oneself. Plus, no longer does a &#8220;bestseller&#8221; incorporate writing ability as the primary reason it becomes one &#8212; promotional ability, this thing called &#8220;platform,&#8221; or &#8220;presence,&#8221; or &#8220;networking,&#8221; which is really equal part sugarcoating to make nice and bull$*** to make headway. Just look at the &#8220;democratic&#8221; model of Harper Collins&#8217; Authonomy, a nice idea on paper but a failure in practice. All too often the &#8220;up votes&#8221; went to people who&#8217;d been generous in giving others kudos and gold stars and reciprocating in return; it did nothing to offer valid critique or editing, because that would bruise the writer/user&#8217;s ego too much and wind up with down-votes turned to playground anarchy. The &#8220;democratic&#8221; publishing model is really the diplomatic equivalent of Jersey Shore.</p>
<p>Moreover, there&#8217;s no soul involved in the mechanical digitzation of words on a page. Call me old fashioned, but there&#8217;s just something, I don&#8217;t know, romantic about curling up with a paperback (or even a hardcover) in a quiet room without the buzzing and flashing of wi-fi routers and Twitter updates. Seeing as the democratic model has become a proven failure, the next step will be formulas and analytics to determine what people like to read and what sells. Nielsen BookScan + Google PageRank + how many likes on Facebook + Tweets and followers + readability statistics will wind us all in an idiocratic mess. This is the C:\Spot.run model, the cold, dystopian future that Bradbury and Orwell warned us about. (Two authors who&#8217;d be in the slush pile today because their heroes didn&#8217;t &#8220;sparkle.&#8221;)</p>
<p>But it&#8217;s also about advertising, just like how baseball is no longer America&#8217;s pastime but &#8220;passive income&#8221; for the stadiums that re-christen ballparks with their company brand. The next thing for publishing, if it hasn&#8217;t come to this point already, will be advertisements inserted within the Kindle &#8220;book&#8221; itself (sorry, but ebooks are not books, at least not to me), and someday even the content diluted with pointless SEO keywords and &#8220;trending topics&#8221; &#8212; the Google-ization of literature is what it will be. You&#8217;ll have marketing &#8220;gurus&#8221; commissioning aspiring authors to write &#8220;novels&#8221; with thinly disguised versions of the CEOs themselves as the &#8220;heroes&#8221; and their rivals as the bad guys. Captain Coke vs. the Mad Dr. Pepper.</p>
<p>Electronic publishing is maybe the best thing that could happen for the BUSINESS of the Internet, but the worst that could happen for writers (who are too prolific and intelligent to call themselves &#8220;bloggers&#8221;), for publishing industry employees, such as agents and editors, who will maybe have an edge in re-branding themselves as &#8220;coaches&#8221; or &#8220;marketing experts&#8221; or some such puffed-up title, and yes, in the end, for the readers, whose chance to experience the next War &amp; Peace will be diluted yet again, thwarted by the One Percent Powers That Be who&#8217;ve managed to make something corporate and soulless out of the one thing sacred to our very human existence: the creative spark that ignites a powerful human narrative. Mechanized, monetized, and in the end, pulverized.</p>
<p>I sincerely hope I&#8217;m not around to see it. I certainly won&#8217;t be there to write it, because if a dead tree falls and no one at Amazon is there to digitize it, then no one will know and no one will care. <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_sad.gif' alt=':(' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on How to Design Your Book Cover by Enblanco Creativo</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2011/07/07/how-to-design-your-book-cover/comment-page-1#comment-30949</link>
		<dc:creator>Enblanco Creativo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Dec 2011 11:00:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice article, I see the point of the anonymous but he&#039;s not right. Covers have to comunicate, in 1980 or in 2011. A good cover wich tell perfectly about the book never need to be updated, maybe for people who buy books because beautiful and modern covers. Nobody would change Michael Angelo&#039;s paintings for new ones because is art and comunicate perfectly, cover should be the same.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Checklist for Revising a Novel by Between the Sheets &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Revising Your NaNoWriMo Novel&#8230;or Any Other Novel For That Matter</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2009/12/21/checklist-for-revising-a-novel/comment-page-1#comment-30943</link>
		<dc:creator>Between the Sheets &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Revising Your NaNoWriMo Novel&#8230;or Any Other Novel For That Matter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Dec 2011 02:02:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by Lauren</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2007/11/08/100-free-fictional-character-ideas/comment-page-1#comment-30940</link>
		<dc:creator>Lauren</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2011 18:50:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Timothy,
I am an aspiring actress/author, and at the moment I am having a severly hard time developing a new story. I already have one written, if you would like to see some of that, but I can&#039;t think of any new ideas. PLEASE HELP! Just contact me by my email.
-Lauren</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Timothy,<br />
I am an aspiring actress/author, and at the moment I am having a severly hard time developing a new story. I already have one written, if you would like to see some of that, but I can&#8217;t think of any new ideas. PLEASE HELP! Just contact me by my email.<br />
-Lauren</p>
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		<title>Comment on Happy Thanksgiving Wishes by lexi</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2007/11/22/happy-thanksgiving-wishes/comment-page-1#comment-30937</link>
		<dc:creator>lexi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Nov 2011 23:56:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>HAPPY THANKSGIVING TIM!!!</description>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by lexi</title>
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		<dc:creator>lexi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Nov 2011 23:53:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love writing fanasy stories and I love poetry. Im only 12 but im not that small. I am a straght A student and i am happy all the time. I agree with CJ that the masculine pronouns in the article are very strange but great in the same way.</description>
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		<title>Comment on 10 NaNoWriMo Tips by J. Timothy King</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2009/10/23/10-nanowrimo-tips/comment-page-1#comment-30928</link>
		<dc:creator>J. Timothy King</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 30 Oct 2011 01:21:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, HK. BTW, it&#039;s only 1.7K per day if you actually plan on writing every single damn day of the month. :) Including weekends and Thanksgiving. (Maybe you can get a few hundred words in between the turkey and the pumpkin pie?)

So I was assuming a proper holiday with the family, weekends with the kids, and a day or two of extra slack in case something went terribly wrong (like mononucleosis or pneumonia—and there is something going around this year that&#039;s knocked out at least three people I know, each for several days).

As it turned out, ironically, I never made 50K words the year I wrote that post. However, I did complete the novel (at a little less than 50K words), which I published.

-TimK</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, HK. BTW, it&#8217;s only 1.7K per day if you actually plan on writing every single damn day of the month. <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Including weekends and Thanksgiving. (Maybe you can get a few hundred words in between the turkey and the pumpkin pie?)</p>
<p>So I was assuming a proper holiday with the family, weekends with the kids, and a day or two of extra slack in case something went terribly wrong (like mononucleosis or pneumonia—and there is something going around this year that&#8217;s knocked out at least three people I know, each for several days).</p>
<p>As it turned out, ironically, I never made 50K words the year I wrote that post. However, I did complete the novel (at a little less than 50K words), which I published.</p>
<p>-TimK</p>
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		<title>Comment on 10 NaNoWriMo Tips by Hermitknut</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hermitknut</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Oct 2011 20:40:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This article is brilliant :D However, I have to point out something. You state that you have to hit 2,500 words per day to reach 50k, which isn&#039;t true at all. It&#039;s 1,667 words per day (okay, 1,667 and 1,666 on alternating days). I did that in my first year of NaNo and hit 50k (just!). 2,500 was too much for me to get done with my schedule at the time, although commendable. :) Just thought I&#039;d mention it.
Otherwise, excellent article!

HK</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This article is brilliant <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' />  However, I have to point out something. You state that you have to hit 2,500 words per day to reach 50k, which isn&#8217;t true at all. It&#8217;s 1,667 words per day (okay, 1,667 and 1,666 on alternating days). I did that in my first year of NaNo and hit 50k (just!). 2,500 was too much for me to get done with my schedule at the time, although commendable. <img src='http://bethestory.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  Just thought I&#8217;d mention it.<br />
Otherwise, excellent article!</p>
<p>HK</p>
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		<title>Comment on Carnival of Storytelling – October 20, 2011 by Liz</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 23 Oct 2011 03:54:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for including my article in your carnival. I had fun looking through all your links. Thanks!</description>
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		<title>Comment on Editing Your First Novel: 7 Things You Must Know by Editing &#38; Proofreading 101 &#171; Mine &#38; Other Stories</title>
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		<dc:creator>Editing &#38; Proofreading 101 &#171; Mine &#38; Other Stories</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Sep 2011 17:45:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] story. Take a look! http://ghostwriterdad.com/10-quick-tips-for-powerful-proofreading/       http://bethestory.com/2008/08/08/editing-your-first-novel-7-things-you-must-know [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] story. Take a look! <a href="http://ghostwriterdad.com/10-quick-tips-for-powerful-proofreading/" rel="nofollow">http://ghostwriterdad.com/10-quick-tips-for-powerful-proofreading/</a>       <a href="http://bethestory.com/2008/08/08/editing-your-first-novel-7-things-you-must-know" rel="nofollow">http://bethestory.com/2008/08/08/editing-your-first-novel-7-things-you-must-know</a> [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on 10 Flash Fiction Writing Tips by What I learned this week, September 16, 2011 &#124; Bill Chance</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2010/06/18/10-flash-fiction-writing-tips/comment-page-1#comment-30910</link>
		<dc:creator>What I learned this week, September 16, 2011 &#124; Bill Chance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Sep 2011 05:09:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on How to Name Characters by Transcription of Bailey’s Writing Tips podcast episode 017 (Dec 2010) – names and characters &#171; Morgen Bailey&#039;s Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>Transcription of Bailey’s Writing Tips podcast episode 017 (Dec 2010) – names and characters &#171; Morgen Bailey&#039;s Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Aug 2011 00:00:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] being a better writer’ and http://bethestory.com/2006/01/25/the-secret-to-naming-characters and http://bethestory.com/2006/02/24/how-to-name-characters are great pages. As is http://www.poewar.com/six-quick-tips-on-character-names a blog by writer [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] being a better writer’ and <a href="http://bethestory.com/2006/01/25/the-secret-to-naming-characters" rel="nofollow">http://bethestory.com/2006/01/25/the-secret-to-naming-characters</a> and <a href="http://bethestory.com/2006/02/24/how-to-name-characters" rel="nofollow">http://bethestory.com/2006/02/24/how-to-name-characters</a> are great pages. As is <a href="http://www.poewar.com/six-quick-tips-on-character-names" rel="nofollow">http://www.poewar.com/six-quick-tips-on-character-names</a> a blog by writer [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Secret to Naming Characters by Transcription of Bailey’s Writing Tips podcast episode 017 (Dec 2010) – names and characters &#171; Morgen Bailey&#039;s Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>Transcription of Bailey’s Writing Tips podcast episode 017 (Dec 2010) – names and characters &#171; Morgen Bailey&#039;s Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Aug 2011 20:54:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] The Story is a blog by J Timothy King about ‘writing stories and being a better writer’ and http://bethestory.com/2006/01/25/the-secret-to-naming-characters and http://bethestory.com/2006/02/24/how-to-name-characters are great pages. As is [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] The Story is a blog by J Timothy King about ‘writing stories and being a better writer’ and <a href="http://bethestory.com/2006/01/25/the-secret-to-naming-characters" rel="nofollow">http://bethestory.com/2006/01/25/the-secret-to-naming-characters</a> and <a href="http://bethestory.com/2006/02/24/how-to-name-characters" rel="nofollow">http://bethestory.com/2006/02/24/how-to-name-characters</a> are great pages. As is [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on 100 Free Fictional Character Ideas by CJ</title>
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		<dc:creator>CJ</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Aug 2011 19:33:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, I have to agree that the masculine pronouns in this article are weird and give it a definite odd sense. It feels very strange. Also &#039;convention&#039; is ever changing and hardly a reason to keep to so odd and jarring a habit. In the end this winds up feeling kind of demeaning, and I&#039;m not even female...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, I have to agree that the masculine pronouns in this article are weird and give it a definite odd sense. It feels very strange. Also &#8216;convention&#8217; is ever changing and hardly a reason to keep to so odd and jarring a habit. In the end this winds up feeling kind of demeaning, and I&#8217;m not even female&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Is my story cliché and contrived? by Mary Margret Daughtridge</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Margret Daughtridge</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Jul 2011 18:11:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Loved this post!


I loved that you didn&#039;t engage in the knuckle-rapping and sneering that passes for discussion of the subject. For the novice writer wishing to write genre fiction, fearing cliche and contrivance squashes creativity rather than helping it along.

Most of all I loved your advice: Put together characters for whom this plot makes perfect sense, and your story won’t be contrived, because the characters themselves become the “reason why.” And make your characters unique and interesting, and your story won’t be a cliché, because the characters themselves become the originality in the story.

Good stuff.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Loved this post!</p>
<p>I loved that you didn&#8217;t engage in the knuckle-rapping and sneering that passes for discussion of the subject. For the novice writer wishing to write genre fiction, fearing cliche and contrivance squashes creativity rather than helping it along.</p>
<p>Most of all I loved your advice: Put together characters for whom this plot makes perfect sense, and your story won’t be contrived, because the characters themselves become the “reason why.” And make your characters unique and interesting, and your story won’t be a cliché, because the characters themselves become the originality in the story.</p>
<p>Good stuff.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Editing Your First Novel: 7 Things You Must Know by Anonymous</title>
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		<dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jul 2011 22:51:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent summary of the editing process. It helped me get to the arduous business at hand...liberating my manuscript.

One thing that helps me is having a &#039;fragments&#039; file open at the same time so I can toss old bits away without feeling like I&#039;ve lost anything, as I can always go back and salvage them if I change my mind, yet still move forward with the actual manuscript. 

Another thing, at the end of an editing day, I email my manuscript to myself, in case my computer crashes or disks fail. This has saved me many a time.

Thanks again!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent summary of the editing process. It helped me get to the arduous business at hand&#8230;liberating my manuscript.</p>
<p>One thing that helps me is having a &#8216;fragments&#8217; file open at the same time so I can toss old bits away without feeling like I&#8217;ve lost anything, as I can always go back and salvage them if I change my mind, yet still move forward with the actual manuscript. </p>
<p>Another thing, at the end of an editing day, I email my manuscript to myself, in case my computer crashes or disks fail. This has saved me many a time.</p>
<p>Thanks again!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Self-Publishing for Fun and Profit by charlotte abel</title>
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		<dc:creator>charlotte abel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jul 2011 14:23:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Tim,

Thanks for another informative and interesting post. 

I&#039;m one of those &quot;Amazon first&quot; authors. Instead of setting up an independent publishing business, I published under my own name. My reasons for doing so were ...

1. I am completely right-brained and totally incompetent when it comes to anything numerical. (I balance my checkbook by calling the bank and asking them how much money I have). If I set up an independent publishing company, I would have to get a business tax ID, keep a ledger and file quarterly returns instead of just adding my income to my husbands and letting his accountant handle it all. 

2. It&#039;s hard enough developing my own name into a &quot;brand,&quot; I don&#039;t think I have the energy to start over with a company name.

3. All I really want to do is write, create cover art, and produce video trailers for my books! ... (and hang out with my writing buddies on Twitter, find and read great indie novels like &quot;From the Ashes of Courage&quot; and &quot;I Wish,&quot; and comment on other people&#039;s blogs).

All joking aside, I take my writing seriously and spend eight hours a day writing and doing writing related &quot;stuff.&quot; This is no hobby. I hired a publicist to market &quot;Enchantment&quot; and its sequels. She&#039;s doing a fantastic job, but I still have to spend a lot of time promoting myself and my books. I don&#039;t think I could handle running a business as well. I admire you and other indies that truly do it all!

Charlotte</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Tim,</p>
<p>Thanks for another informative and interesting post. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m one of those &#8220;Amazon first&#8221; authors. Instead of setting up an independent publishing business, I published under my own name. My reasons for doing so were &#8230;</p>
<p>1. I am completely right-brained and totally incompetent when it comes to anything numerical. (I balance my checkbook by calling the bank and asking them how much money I have). If I set up an independent publishing company, I would have to get a business tax ID, keep a ledger and file quarterly returns instead of just adding my income to my husbands and letting his accountant handle it all. </p>
<p>2. It&#8217;s hard enough developing my own name into a &#8220;brand,&#8221; I don&#8217;t think I have the energy to start over with a company name.</p>
<p>3. All I really want to do is write, create cover art, and produce video trailers for my books! &#8230; (and hang out with my writing buddies on Twitter, find and read great indie novels like &#8220;From the Ashes of Courage&#8221; and &#8220;I Wish,&#8221; and comment on other people&#8217;s blogs).</p>
<p>All joking aside, I take my writing seriously and spend eight hours a day writing and doing writing related &#8220;stuff.&#8221; This is no hobby. I hired a publicist to market &#8220;Enchantment&#8221; and its sequels. She&#8217;s doing a fantastic job, but I still have to spend a lot of time promoting myself and my books. I don&#8217;t think I could handle running a business as well. I admire you and other indies that truly do it all!</p>
<p>Charlotte</p>
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		<title>Comment on What the End of Borders Means for Authors by J. Timothy King</title>
		<link>http://bethestory.com/2011/07/25/what-the-end-of-borders-means-for-authors/comment-page-1#comment-30877</link>
		<dc:creator>J. Timothy King</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jul 2011 20:14:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Wendy. Your question inspired a whole post, which is here: &lt;a href=&quot;http://bethestory.com/2011/07/26/self-publishing-for-fun-and-profit&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;http://bethestory.com/2011/07/26/self-publishing-for-fun-and-profit&lt;/a&gt;. -TimK</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Wendy. Your question inspired a whole post, which is here: <a href="http://bethestory.com/2011/07/26/self-publishing-for-fun-and-profit" rel="nofollow">http://bethestory.com/2011/07/26/self-publishing-for-fun-and-profit</a>. -TimK</p>
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